Friday, September 25, 2009

Ark. player ends game with noble gesture


During the final seconds of the game Sept. 18, Thamail Morgan headed for a touchdown. But, the Cave City teammate stopped short to kneel at the 5-yard line instead.
This was a way the Arkansas all-state football player could pay respect to Yellville-Summit. The losing high school team's No. 72, Kymbal Duffey, was killed and four players injured in a truck wreck Sept. 11. ArkansasVarsity.com

Wednesday, September 23, 2009

My first day at Anoka Ramsey Community College

Even though fall semester had started, it was a relief to find the online "Media Writing" course at ARCC. I had to register for the single course as if I were a brand new college student. This came as a surprise because I’ve been at Normandale Community College (NCC) two years. Still, I got a nice welcome when I drove up to the quiet Coon Rapids campus to purchase a used textbook, quite the find at the time.

Sunday, September 20, 2009

Blue is the new black

In the 70s, women felt happier leaving their mothers’ domestic roles behind. But, as women have taken on male-dominated roles, they have put more stress on themselves.
Now men feel happier about their lives while women take far more antidepressants and feel less happy no matter what they achieve. – The New York Times, Sept. 20, 2009, http://www.nytimes.com/2009/09/20/opinion/20dowd.html?em

Thursday, September 17, 2009

Chain reaction causes war zone at crash scene

Two people were killed and 20 injured Wednesday in an accident on Interstate 790 W. Two tractor-trailers colliding apparently started the chain reaction at 6:45 a.m. that involved four tractor-trailers and fourteen cars, according to Eden Prairie Police Sgt. Albert Wei.
The crash scene looked like something from a war zone unlike anything he had seen in his 18 and one-half years with the fire department, Eden Prairie Fire Chief Tony Sullivan said.
The drivers and passengers trapped inside three cars were freed when his firefighters cut the roofs off, Sullivan said. Two of the four worst injured were airlifted to the trauma center in Statesville from Memorial Hospital in Eden Prairie.
The accident in the northbound lanes closed the entire highway, north and south, according to Wei. Rush hour traffic was also backed up for three hours as commuters had to use Interstate 690 E.
As of 10 a.m. Wednesday, the interstate was still closed and it was unknown when it would open again, Wei said.

Monday, September 14, 2009

Clues point to inside job in Yale killing

On Sunday, the same day her wedding was scheduled, police found the Yale graduate student dead inside the campus lab where she worked. Annie Le, 24, had disappeared five days before. Due to the evidence from the hidden crime scene, police tell the Ivy League community this is not a random act. - www.msn.com

Thursday, September 10, 2009

The Sonic in Bloomington

The new Sonic in Bloomington was a fitting way to wrap up the first week of fall semester.
While dining curbside, I ordered a tasty burger with a milk shake special for $2.99 and a side of French fries for $1. Even though food server, Ashlee, didn’t wear roller skates, her service was great.

Wednesday, September 2, 2009

Lessons learned about leads

There was a lot of good stuff about leads in Chapter 7. No matter how much I learn, I can always use reminders about leads, such as AVOID:
- stating the obvious or negative, which helps eliminate wordiness.
- adjectives/adverbs that often state opinions instead of facts.
- using yesterday/today/tomorrow for times.
Plus, I need to work hard to keep my leads specific without useless details, concise and to the point in shorter sentences and appealing to readers.